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Feedback by El Skel

Scoring finished:

1148 days ago

Submitted on:

Jul 10 '05

Scored by:

1,266 people

Comments:

26 comments

Final average score:

2.16 out of 5

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megarockman24 on Jul 10 '05

thats too random of a shirt for me

provetheworst on Jul 10 '05

I don't like the contrast of pink/red on the khaki shirt.

ErasingTheMaps on Jul 10 '05

I like this idea lots but I don't think its right exactly for a shirt.

SingSwtHarmony on Jul 10 '05

Too much going on...if you broke it up into about five shirts, it would be rad!

andrewbouchie on Jul 10 '05

way to much.

valtastic on Jul 11 '05

i have no idea what's going on...but i really like the color combinations.

with_the_worst_intentions on Jul 11 '05

Put it on burgundy.

talentshow on Jul 11 '05

I think the blues in here are superfluous, and could be replaced with either the pink or burgundy. Like someone else said, I think putting it on a burgundy shirt could be a good idea, and with a little tweaking it would eliminate the need to print the dark red.

I enjoy the design otherwise, and I'd probably wear this.

El Skel on Jul 11 '05

Thanks for your comments. I realize that there seems to be a lot going on in this design. I just wanted to capture the idea of recording music at home, in isolation- as a collage-inspired vector illustration. Excelsior.

Fortino Samano on Jul 11 '05

khaki bad, looks like evil melted neopolitan ice cream. its difficult to mix with pink. maybe use another shade of red, orange or burgundy. hate it when people don't appreciate the hecticness. but maybe change the sitting guitarist and birds on wires? only giving criticism because it's good, can't be arsed talking about crappy teees, gives me indigestion

FAZLI on Jul 11 '05

so confusing

mad cat on Jul 11 '05

I love the colors!
There is, however, a lot going on.
Just the butterfly drummer would be sweet!!

CrudelyDrawn on Jul 11 '05

The graphics are great but the organization is a little too messy. Either keep it nice and orderly or REALLY scatter it.

digital oblivion on Jul 11 '05

I absolutely love every part of this shirt. I'd wear it all the time. 5

osaxety on Jul 11 '05

Id so love this shirt if it was just the butterfly jamming on the drums in the bottom right corner, that'd be far out [:

the gurglagon on Jul 11 '05

i really like this a lot. it is very good the way it is. do not alter the composition because a design with this many elements should not be any more organized than it already is.

64crayolas on Jul 11 '05

not on brown please.

PerdyClaudine on Jul 11 '05

i really like your graphics here but i dont like how they are placed. i would love it if the graphics were closer together or touching so they incorporate each other more. maybe try a bottom left/right positioning as well. you get a 5. but if you improve maybe a $ as well.

NotCordial on Jul 11 '05

AWESOME...5 and I'll buy!

BiggSteve777 on Jul 12 '05

I see 5 great designs. Great for 5 different shirts. Too busy for one shirt.

Kens on Jul 12 '05

Fantastic 4

fastjumper on Jul 13 '05

i love your color choice and graphic details, but im agree with who sais that there are too many things...there is no focus point, the eye attraction has no way to move correctly...
you could try to recompose the elements or to eliminate something.
aniway nice idea and graphic style
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littlelostgirl_xoxo on Jul 15 '05

i like the khaki but i do not like how busy it looks i agree that it could be broken down into a couple different shirts instead of one. maybe not five, but two definitely.