This is my first submission. I hope I was right in thinking the teeshirt color didn\\\'t count as a color... I hope you like it...

I like the artwork... but it's hard to see their clothes against the black. Also, the design isn't the intriguing, so I probably wouldn't wear it. Would very much like to see your future submissions though.

Great first submission! I look forward to more from you.

im sorry but what the @#$@#$ does ifc mean

the zoom and unzoom thing makes it hard to focus

i like your illustration
it's pretty
your color choices need work
seems too girly for an IFC shirt
and im not sure how... cohesive?
your drawings are as a whole
i hope you submit more to threadless.

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-k.

Awesome - and i love your work on your website!!!

Other than the fact that the girl on the right looks more like she's laughing than crying, this shirt is awesome! Good work.

I really like it, but i agree about the zoom, unzoom, slower would help. Maybe lose the two girls in the foreground so that you can focus on the two in the background.

I'd think about a differnt layout maybe seperating the reality from the dream or distiguishing them some other way? Great Idea though I hope I didn't get on your sh$t list.

zooming...can you make this toggle button?

The art style looks great, mildly realistic with slight anime influences.

I like it. The drawings are good. It would stand on its own without the ifc logo though.

hahaha wow this shirt is pure awesomeness!
i love the people .. idea/execution!
AWESOME!

very original and creative... i like

i like the girls but crossing out tv ad relpacing it with daydreams seems a little cliche to me.

Thanks so much for the feedback (positive and otherwise) everyone. I'm sorry about the speed of the animation. It wasn't supposed to go that fast. (I don't have flash so I made a .gif )

Basically a lot of the weirdness I can put to me being afraid of a crap/rejected submission my first time out. Especially so close to the deadline for the IFC contest. And the rest to well...inadequacy. But I"m workin on it. :-D Don't worry I'll be sticking around...

...and yeah I know it's cliche as all get out, but it really was a badly executed thought and I felt that was the only sure fire way to not be misunderstood.

great. LOVE it

clean illustration.

I like it!!.......Can they make the shirt zoom in & out like that?....That's an eye catcher.

Good drawings, I'm not sure what's going on in the picture, so I probably wouldn't buy it, but it's cool.
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At first I thought the girl on the right was peeing her pants, but other than that I agree with everybody else.

As always, I admire your art. If not this, other works on shirts. I can see it now... Hot Topic exclusives? heh

zoom in zoom out is pissing me off...i like the design though, once i get over the ADD factor

ok four, I think we can say that dead horse has been sufficiently beaten... no zoom next time. got it.

seems to be telling a story I don't know and think I should know. Looks like an anime i haven't seen. So I dunno, the concept is both too detailed and too vague....

If you are using the Explorer browser just push the red x button in your tool bar( the stop button) and that freezes the animation. Nice design by the way, I like your style. :)

That girl with the axe got blood on her nice dress... what a pity.
Good design, I don't think I'd buy it though. I look forward to more of your stuff, this was really your first design???? Good job.
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K.

siue, I think you do have a point. It was perhaps to much of a "story" for a t design.

EvilPinkie, thanks, glad to hear it, and wow I didn't know that "trick". huh. learn something new everyday.

Dazed, yes it's my first design. I've been drawing for a long time but this is the first time I've tried anything to do with apparel.

Mikey, right back at cha...?