Threadless T-Shirts - In the deep ocean

In the deep ocean by egg stroke

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81 days ago

Submitted on:

Jun 11 '08

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1,643 people

Comments:

45 comments

Final average score:

2.32 out of 5

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if can.. i choose live in the deep ocean...

mistrnick on Jun 11 '08

I say ditch the whale and boat idea, without it, the design is way more solid.

yeohgh on Jun 11 '08

you have such nice drawing lines,,,,wonderful JIMMY!!! $5

Maltzmania on Jun 11 '08

$$5!

palitosci on Jun 11 '08

buen dibujo... $4

Asi y todo creo que hay muchos diseños que estan utilizando cabelleras... No hay que trillar los estilos.
El tuyo... muy bien resuelto.

Suzanna2009 on Jun 11 '08

I absolutely love the mermaid. I would totally buy it as a shirt. But I feel like the cartoon-y whale and boats on the side don't fit and are screwing with the overall look and composition of the piece. You should think about nixing those.

trippyhippie on Jun 11 '08

The whales and the boat need to go

DaughterofKngs on Jun 11 '08

I agree with the previous posters -- the design is stronger with just the mermaid. Gorgeous line work.

roadkill3d on Jun 12 '08

trippyhippie on Jun 11 '08
The whales and the boat need to go

Littlelou on Jun 12 '08

Yep - turf the boat and whale cos the mermaid is beautiful.

walmazan on Jun 12 '08

nice lines, nice style!

Twitchii on Jun 12 '08

cut the whale and boat and maybe add some more of her tail. Other than that it's awesome!

applegary on Jun 12 '08

Ditto ditto, the mermaid is mer-velous!

sophrina_sphinx on Jun 12 '08

$5 if you lost the whales and ship

evenfall on Jun 12 '08

I agree, definitely5$ if you loose the ship and whales. They're cute, but somehow seem out of place, the mermaid being so delicate. And I really like the mermaid.

chelly on Jun 12 '08

wow

Danielle430 on Jun 12 '08

Definitely lose the "cartoons" on the side. The mermaid is amazing by itself.

xiaobaosg on Jun 12 '08

Yes just the mermaid is good enough.

littlecynicism on Jun 12 '08

Love the mermaid, hate the whale & such. I'm giving you a 5 on the understanding that it is for the mermaid and not that other stuff.

swisher22 on Jun 12 '08

I really like this, but the whales on the side clash stylistically. I would remove them completely.

redmage on Jun 12 '08

is it a mer-man? its face is very angular and gives the impression to be, if its a woman round it off. if not. COOL.

and i concur.... whale, boat... bye

I Usually Think on Jun 12 '08

I'm giving it a 4; it'd get a 5 and a buy without the whales and ship.

inoeimgood on Jun 12 '08

that's a lotta hair. lool.

i know very little about art on Jun 12 '08

Cool

courtney pie on Jun 13 '08

very cool

ktkdk on Jun 13 '08

byea to whale and ship. dont really get what they are doing there

oh.no.not.her on Jun 14 '08

Love it!

eudie13 on Jun 14 '08

yeah, everything but the mermaid goes.

FRICKINAWESOME on Jun 14 '08

I don't think the whales and boat would be a problem and would add the pic if they were positioned the other way and appeared to be in the background a bit.

Harfangoria on Jun 14 '08

Agree about whales and boat, unless frickin's advice works... I don't see how they'd be repositioned without detracting, though. Lose them and you have a sure $5 from me, and lots from other people.

Ryomoki on Jun 15 '08

Please no boat/whale!!

opifan64 on Jun 15 '08

awesome line work!

motherseer on Jun 15 '08

i agree you need to get rid of the whales and the little boat. also do something to her hand that's in the air, like define the fingers more. as it is, it just looks a little strange. other than that, awesome drawing, with great lines in the hair!

J von Cupcake on Jun 15 '08

I wholeheartedly agree with what everyone else has been saying. I -love- the mermaid, but perhaps her right hand could indeed use a bit more detail. And usually I'm a big fan of whales, but the shirt might work better without the whales&ship. Unless you drew them in the same style as the mermaid, maybe.

Either way, I hope your shirt will get printed because I sure as hell would buy it, it's absolutely stunning.