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Hehe. Neat idea, shouldn't the balls be in some metallic color like silver though?

Change the color of the balls (hehe) and I'd buy it!!! 5

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That's pretty funny! Nice work in the critiques. :)

Hm, good idea, but the drawing needs work imo.

i agree, you should work on those balls (haha)

rest is fine for me

Oh, totally agree with silver foil for the balls! You have a really cool idea here, but I hate how the people are drawn. The bodies made from circles do nothing for me. How about trading them out for people made out of twisted paper clips, to go with the office desk theme. Also, it bothers me that the perspective is wrong. They aren't standing in line with the balls.

Is a good idea...work on the illustration

agree with above thoughts... the perspective is a little off... like the string of the ball the guy's getting ready to throw should be in front of the device (so you see the full string) since guy #2 looks like he's in front of the device too (this is hard to describe, hope that makes sense). and the shadows seem to need a little work, the light source is coming from a lot of directions. i really love the idea behind it.. if this doesn't do great i really hope you submit another version of it

I keep thinking they're supposed to be those wooden art model...figure things but they're way too rounded and don't really appeal to me personally. Also agree on the silver for the balls.
Also, I don't know if it's just me personally, but a lot of times using white for highlights is really unappealing. It makes everything too bubbly, especially when they're not very shiny..also, the light source seems inconsistent but at this point I'm just nitpicking

Thanks for all the ideas!

very funny. love the idea.

Thats really funny!

great idea, and well execued, 5$!!!!

yeap, the idea is very nice... just the style... and the ball even don't hang in same height!

It's an awesome idea, but the art doesn't do it for me.

Interesting idea, but I don't really like the style...

Yeah, I think it needs some improvement. The people look too much like the balls themselves I think. Maybe they could be like, real humans or possibly desk objects? And defff silver foil for the balls. That would be nice

good idea, but is there a reason for the people being the way they are?

This is one if my very first designs and I was trying to keep them as simple as possible. But I like the idea of desk objects instead (where are you guys during critiques?). Thanks! 2 days left

this is my favorite of yours so far
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