What I like about Harry: his vintage t-shirt collection, his pearly whites and the way he hums...

this seems pretty unfinished to me, it really seems to need colour. i don't understand why you coloured the presentation rather than the actual design either, because people are definitely going to be more attracted to your coloured green monster than to the blank design on that guy's shirt.

i agree ^

lol @ new meaning to "she did the Monster Mash"

I like it. I think I would be more likely to wear it as a line drawing than if it was brightly colored. Nice