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Were you planning on using color if this prints? Or just in black and white? If you plan to use the color, not so crazy about the orange. But red, as recommended above, would be nice.
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It's a really nice illustration - but the presentation is a bit confusing. You didn't need to add the red if there was no intention to have it in the design IMO
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I'm imagining the people are the factory's owners just
sitting back enjoying the benefits of owning a factory. I would love to own a factory that made toys. |
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The smoke looks very out of place. It's too round and clean-- it doesn't fit with the rest od the design.
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the presentation is kind've confusing.. and now I think I like it with the bits of red.
either way, nice illustration. |