My old submissions were pretty awful, and I haven't tried in a while, so I decided I wanted to get back in the game. Treat this like my first submission, my old one's are dead to me! haha.

anyways, I really want to have some kind of text in the scroll,
but since that could be added so easily later, I decided to just put the
submission up now.

At first when I designed this, it was for a quote
that went along the lines of, "Everyone Poops"
I decided to make that the title of the peice anyway.
but I'm not so sure that fits this drawing.
Anyways, sugguestions and crit welcome!
Placement is up for debate.

Thanks :]

Love the schnoz and those chubby legs on that royal proclaimer! I enjoy the drawing style here and i spose' the point is that this dude is reading off something that the woman finds none too pleasing (unless she just got a sudden nosebleed) , but there just needs a little something extra going on here and im sold on this one.

^^^ Ditto.

i like the placement that's on this version. i give it $5, and it should definately be on dark blue or brown possibly.

I'm not good at critiquing, and since this is my first time, i'll just go ahead and say that I like it a lot!

I don't get it.

I don't get you!

Great illustration, great colors. I like it as is, but I'm curious to see how the addition of text changes it/adds to it. Nice work!

Great colors. I think her thumb should be alongside her nose (ie visible to us) because at the moment she looks like she's picking her nose in a big way. Nicely drawn - love his nose!

yeah, now that i look at it, it does look
like she's picking her nose.

i really would like to add text,
but i just haven't thought of the perfect
one liner yet. sugguestions please!

This is just what I think when I see this:

The royal proclaimer guy had an 'accident' and is planning on cleaning himself with the scroll. The woman is holding her nose due to the stench. I normally don't think about 'potty jokes', but it seemed to go along with the name of your sub perfectly.

I'd give it a $5 if that's what you were going for and loads of people would see that, but this time it's only a $4. At the same time though, it would be fun to see what people come up with when they don't know the name of the shirt. It would just get annoying trying to explain something you just made up to people that "don't get it". I would probably wear this though if it were printed.

it's not really tellin a story to me either -

yeah i dont get it either

I like your style & the characters, but i dont' get what it means.

I look forward to seeing your next design.

"Being the "Big Nose" of a perfumery is such a hard job."

Its an actual position in perfumeries in Europe. They smell perfumes all day, cant eat ice cream, hot drinks or spicy food or they will kill taste buds. The job usually runs in families, since you cant eat that stuff in childhood and most people do. There have been "Big Noses" for centuries. Just thought it might fit. Enjoy.