Scoring finished:
518 days ago
Submitted on:
Mar 30 '07
Scored by:
2,029 people
Comments:
21 comments
Final average score:
1.92 out of 5
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AWESOME! i especially like that you chose this insect because of the cause and effect phrase "if a butterfly flaps its wings in kansas...." and ends in some kind of weather phenomena.
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Thanks for the good first comments everyone! :)
Chelly, you nailed it! "..a tornado forms somewhere" that's a saying I've always treasured.^^ Tuppe!!!!! Y'know what? I already submitted the thing after you left your comment in the critiques section. I lost interest in checking this critique's blog because no one was really commenting on how it can be improved before submitting... Had I seen your critique before submitting this, I'd really listen to your opinion. I really appreciate that you took the time to constructively comment on people's works. :) |
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I think this looks really good. Color pref: #1 black, #2 navy. I like the design in the middle, where you can see the whole thing.
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[I hope you also see a zipper, a butterfly, a pair of coldfronts, some isobars, and the weather you're looking for!] Hope you like it! :)