A troll\'s night out on the town. Inspired by a band...kind of. Three colors, glow in the dark ink, embroidered styling but not actually embroidered. I just want some feedback. Thanks peoples!

I should have said the print is also on the sleeve and wraps slightly to the back. It doesn't cross the seams.

halp?

i love the musicians, not the orange thing ...sorry for my english

Your english is fine. No worries. What would you change about it? Color? Eliminate it all together? Ideas for something else there? Thanks!

very very nice .

i think the orange notes will be more little on the shirt

Looks good but I think on the top the instrument seems transparent but no the musicians, so I think you'd do all opaque.

please take the outer glow off the figures.

I think the glow makes it difficult to look at. I don't like how their outlines are overlapping. I love the swirly music, but I'd rather see the troll figures opaque and colored.

I agree with removing the glow.
Otherwise it's good to go.

The glow is just to illustrate the glow in the dark ink. It's not part of the design. It can be removed for subbing.

Fully opaque figures...good thanks!

Ok, as always the critique section is did something weird for me. Please look at the second version. I only submitted it once but now I've got this stupid blank third version in front of it. ANGER!

I removed the glow and filled in the overlapping areas. Still would like a glow in the dark ink over the troll figure's outlines.

awsome design but I don't think it needs to overlap the sleave.

Hmmm, thanks! On the sleeve at all then?

Looks good w/o glow and you still must do the full opaque figures :P

http://www.threadless.com/critique/13279/Harakiri

I think the dotted outlines make it a little difficult to see all the detail. I'd love to see you do a version with solid outlines and colorized instead of that ghostly greenish.

Well, I wrote all this out and then it disappeared. Anyway, I changed the outline on the figures to solid lines. I think it shows the detail better. I tried a few other colors but couldn't find anything I really liked. Thanks all who've commented and to all who hopefully will.

Definatly the best version, theses colors look great together. The only thing that bugs me is how much you can see the orange lines behind the guitar (Bass, Im not a music major). It really fights with the flow of thing in my opinon. Really great design though

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maibe they don´t need to be fill with the gray dark color..
are they right??
i think only the green and red are good :)

Now looks better :)

What do you think about my last version? http://www.threadless.com/critique/13279/Harakiri

Thanks! :D

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Looks good now ;) Submit this!
What about my last version? http://www.threadless.com/critique/13279/Harakiri

Submit, I'm sure it would do well!

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i love this it's a very beautiful illustration. maybe make the gray in their outlines the shirt color? i'd have to see how that looks but either way i'd give this $5

Nice work.
I love the placement.

Thanks please vote on the sub!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/149407/Troll_s_Night_Out